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Twilight's First Date Page 9

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A comic commission for Courageous-of-Light:


Page 1:        Previous:                               Final:
Twilight's First Date #1 by The0ne-u-lost         Twilight's First Date Page 8 by DrawingGirl546         Twilight's First Date Page 10 by Aileen-Rose

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Story and Courageous Heart: :iconcourageous-of-light:
Original comic: :iconthe0ne-u-lost:
Art: :icondrawinggirl546:
Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash: My Little Pony, Friendship is magic
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© 2014 - 2024 Drawing-Heart
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Even though I was planning on save a critique like this for Part 10, I feel it is a good time to give you a REAL one:

The design of the characters is really well done in my opinion, although the eyes looks a little off to me. Not sure, but it still looks well drawn. The outfits and wings look pretty good and I say that is one of the best parts on the style you use on your ponies.

The background looks wonderful, even though more could have been added: It looks like a wide open field with a fountain in the middle instead of a park. But the audience would be more fixed on the ponies than the stuff going on in the back.

The one scene that bring me both a warm heart with a good chuckle is when both Twilight and Courageous slowly move in to kiss. Those moments are always so magical. The next panel with the three ponies admiring it all and replying in awe was equally adorable...and when they were caught, the awe changed and that was cute and worth a giggle.

So in the end, you my friend, have done a magnificent job with this second-to-last panel where the happy couple finally share a romantic kiss on their first date. Thank you so much for everything.